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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5948
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

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能较准确地使用学术词汇,词汇运用灵活;可适当增加从句的使用;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

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Nowadays, with the development of economy and the expension of population, some people choose to live in both central areas and rural areas. Of course, both living places have their advantages and disadvantages.But personally, I don't agree with the statement that living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people. Downtown in a city is mostly the most advanced area with plenty of international companies and great opportunities. Thus it's the place attracts most of people's attention who is in his working period. So living in the centre of a city gives working people great convenience to work on a daily basis, which enables them to cut down the consuming time of the transportation to work. If it's not the lucky day, the working people may have to spare more time just to get back and forth from work if they live in the rural areas which is miles from the places they work. Downtown is normally the center of the whole city, which is better equipped with fulfilled city facilities and institutions like hospitals, school, and government department. Living in the central area of city means we are more accessible to the fundenmental facilities which we can not live without. Especially when we have the old and child in the family, it's much considerate that we think about their daily needs. Considering that, I think it's much better living in the centre. Last but not least, living in the rural areas usually means that we live far away from our aquaintances who live far away. It 's of no good if we want to expand our social network. Compare the conveniences of having a five-minute walk with hours of driving, we can make up our minds. The most significant benefit about living in the central cities is the convenience it provides in every aspects of life. We are living in a connecting society, it's much more crucial that we can get in touch with each other and the world conveniently.

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