拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;文章层次较为清晰。
As we can see in the picture, there are four people standing in front of their owned goals to keep the ball and kick the ball to other goals, but heartbreakingly the ball isn’t a real ball. The old father huddled like a ball and the four people are the old father’s children. The picture reflect some abnormal phenomena. The parents hardly bring their child up and afford them to study, but when the child grow up, the child don’t look after their aging parent. They don’t carry out the obligation to look after their parents and even abuse their parents and abandon them. I think we should appreciate the debt of gratitude of parents. When we are young, they teach us to walk and speak. When we are in setback, they do us a favor without requirement. Now they are aging and we are grownup, we should take care of them heart and soul.