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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文章层次较为清晰。
As we can see in the picture, there are four people standing in front of their owned goals to keep the ball out of goal and kick the ball to other people's goals, but heartbreakingly the ball isn’t a real ball. The old father huddled like a ball and the four people are the old father’s children. The picture reflects some abnormal phenomena. The parents hardly bring their children up and afford them to study, but when the children grow up, the children don’t look after their aging parent. They don’t carry out the obligation to look after their parents and even abuse their parents and abandon them. I think we should appreciate the debt of gratitude of parents. When we are young, they teach us to walk and speak. When we are in setback, they do us a favor without requirement. Now they are aging and we are grownup, we should take care of them heart and soul.
