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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40892
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;采用了一些简单的从句。

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Human beings have inertia. Many key to success is persistence time. If you can not overcome humanity itself idler , It is difficult to become a unique and remarkable man. I feel today is just the beginning has an end. : 7:00 am to get up, my day was so open Beginning. Classes back on 10:00 a. Then spent some time playing mobile games, soon 11:00. Noon lunch. Sleeping Nap, wake up again when the already 14:30. Use some time to learn English quickly. Then went to the bathhouse when I Bath, meal back to the bedroom, already 18:00 a. Originally intended learning program immediately and English, but because My own inertia, until the 19:30 began to write in English log. The next evening program intends to study a chapter Code, then sleep. One day on this end. Tomorrow is a new day, hope that tomorrow can be more efficient life!

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