2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Humans being have inertia.In most cases,the key to success is persistence.We can not be a unique and remarkable person unless we overcome the inertia of ourselves. The feeling of myself about today is that has not yet begun on the end.7:00 am to get up,My days start that way. When I returned to the dormitory after class,the time has come to 10:00.Then I spent some time playing app games,the time soon has come to 11:00.In the afternoon,I eat some food and then gone to bed.When I woke up again,the time already come to 14:30.I spent some time in learning english in the afternoon.The night is coming immediately,when I showered and had dinner,the time has come to 18:30.I was going to learn the english and programing immediately,but because of my own inertia until 19:30 I began to write an english diary.Tonight the next chapter going to learn programing,then sleep.One day is on this end. Tomorrow is a fresh day.I hope tomorrow's life more efficiently!