2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Luo Hu Mountain If my foreign friend visit me ,Firstly,i would take him to see my hometown`s mountain-- luo hu mountain.it was famous in GuangDong Province, it has so many beautiful scenery. Secondly,i would take him to my own garden , it is very nice place to make a date with partner.and we can go there have a tea with sunshine.How a wondenderful day!