单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。
My new teacher is science teacher. He’s very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. He often wears a new black shirt and brown pants, with two big shoes. My science teacher is very kind,and he is very smart, isn’t he? Today, we have science class. We are very happy. Because he is so funny. Who is he? He’s Mr. Zhou.