拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
Private cars have found their way into our life and have gained increasing popularity among individuals , which also cause numerous problems , especially the pollution . Pubilic harbor the idea that we should put a “pollution tax” on private cars. For my part , individuals cannot just blame private cars for the pollution and the owners have no necessary to be taxed for it . On the one hand , those individuals who buy private cars have already paid what they need to pay and it is not their duty to pay responsibility for such a social problem -pollution . Even if they take it , the problem can not be solved entirely . They still own the cars and there is still pollution . On the other hand , there are a vast number of reasons for the pollution . That means others should take the responsibility as well , not only private car owners . Above all , private car owners should not be taxed for pollution . However , they need to do something good for the problem . Besides , on the part of the car companies , they should improve the car engine or vehicle size , reducing the pollution . On the part of the individuals , they should enhance their awareness of protecting the environment .
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