文章上下文衔接自然;简单的使用了一些复杂句,但从句使用不充分;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。
I have two good friends that work as teacher in the high schools of my hometown.They work over ten hours everyday as like as the other teacher in high schools,but their wage is deeply lower than other industries.Sometimes,they would suddently come up with an idea that exchange the job,but always were invoilded by the emotion from the young students like their children. We have no doubt that teachers made a lot of contribution for developing of society.They built a teaching knowledge system in our country,and the effection of the system would be continued for a long time. We konw that the teaching resources decides the leavel of coulture.So we need to make improtant in the group of teachers. I really honour every teacher include my good friends work as teachers.No matter in which school they work,the teachers are heroes in my heart.
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