邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；可适当增加几条从句。

There were a lot of violence have taken place one to another since 2010,all the Chinese were amazed it because a lot of students hurt or dead on these violence. So what should we do to improve the safety of the campus. I have some advice here. Firstly, don't let strangers come into the campus without permission,the security guard should carry it out carefully. Secondly, students should improve their safe knowledge to prevent them from dangerous,and tell teachers or headmaster in time if they saw someone behaves strangely. The final point, I think schools can build a group of security guards to look over the campus often to protect the students well and they can ask the policemen for help if they found badmen in time. In a world,the safety of campus concerns about the safety of teachers and students,everyone should try their best to protect it.