小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good girl friend, being beautiful with long and black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth.Good voice makes her singing well. She is not only a clever girl who likes reading, computer games and chess but aslo nice who often helps us .we all like her very much.