小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写方面也要加强；请注意分段。

I have a good friend, being beautiful with long and black hair, two big black eyes and a red lip.Good voice makes her sing well. She is not only a clever girl who likes reading, computer games and chess but aslo a nice girl who often helps us.We all like her very much.