2013年5月25日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:政府资金支持艺术

从句数量稍显不足，注意增加从句和复杂句的使用；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误。

I have two good friends that work as teacher in the high schools of my hometown.They work over ten hours everyday as like as the other teacher in high schools,but their wage is deeply lower than other industries.Sometimes,they would suddently come up with an idea that exchange the job,but always were invoilded by the emotion from the young students like their children. We have no doubt that teachers made a great contribution to social development .They built a knowledge education system in our country,and the effection of the system would be continued for a long time. We know that education resources determine the level of social culture.So we need to make improtant in the group of teachers. I really honour every teacher including my teacher friends.No matter how they work in the school,the teacher is my hero.