2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；衔接成分偏少；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

I believe"the most interesting" is the decisive advantage for J's garden to win"the best" every year. Without something interesting, even harder work and more vegetables and flowers couldn't help Bill beat Joe in the annual 'Nicest Garden Competition' to win "The Best". an overwhelming happiness covered every inch of this town.