小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend, being lovely with long and gloomy hair, two big dark eyes and a red lip.Good sound makes her sing well. She is a brilliant girl who likes reading, computer games and chess.She is also a nice girl who frequently supports us.We all extremely like her.