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【题目要求】
Nowadays in many countries after leaving school, the youngsters are hard to find jobs. what problems would the youth unemployment cause dor the individual and for the society. What measures should be taken to reduce the level of youth unemployment?
【题目讲解】
写作思路：
第一段：介绍背景，大学生难就业
第二段：影响
1 心理压力，对未来的负面影响
2 经济不独立的尴尬
3 对社会的影响：教育资源的浪费
第三/四段：措施
1 临时的工作，先解决吃饭问题；小型电子商务；离开大城市
2 边远地区缺乏人才，做义务或低收入工作，积累工作经验
3 继续教育；政府支持小型企业以创造更多就业岗位; 抬高大学门槛，扩大职业教育
过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；复杂句采用很棒；用词灵活多样，也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇。
The world has seen the increasing number of unemployed youth who just left their schools for decades because the educational organizations only aim to give the students such hollow credential which cannot prepare the next generation for the challenges of career and citizenship.And nowadays the problem is so severe that may harm the modern civilization in effect. The young people have to depend upon their parents or other relatives if they want to maintain their lives,and on the contrary,the destitute,if they are not going to steal the money or rob the banks,can only stay in their thatched house with out food and clean water and so their lovely homes are little better than the places where they wait for the death. The former individual problem seems small but would destroy our society incredibly,and may probably lead to a revolution which is a toll we cannot pay for.So the phenomenon has to be changed.But what should we do? I think the government shall encourage the youth to advance their own enterprises and bolster them by state finance.
