2.然后以约120个词就 “过度依赖电脑的弊端”的主题发表看法,
并包括如下要点:
沉迷于电脑对学生造成的不利影响;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。
Playing computer has advantages and disadvantages ,computer can help us think remember and calculate fast.however,it may make mistake and take the huge harm to the human. As for the use of computer ,i think that computer may harm your body if you are addicated in it.Whats more, your sight might be down as you play it for much time .In some times ,some people who want steal the country's message will use computer to harm the country.Seeing that you must waster much money when you on line by computer .in my opinion ,we should put the use of computer down.