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恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误，尤其加强学术词汇的使用；请注意分段。
After hearing the story,i realize a wram and sweet family need the power of care.The Peggy is a considerate wife and her husband is a responsible and good person.All of they have done let me admiire them and make a decision that do the same peoson in the future.In fact,as a children we have the moral responsibility to return our parent's love and care for us when we grow up,because they gave us life and always there for us whenever we need them.From the story that we can see parents needn't the material things just need our care.The husband of in the story has done it,he make a date with his mother,a little thing but important to his mother.In my daily life,i will take much care of my parents,such as call them once a week.
