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I live in Binzhou ,a beautiful city in Shandong province.If my foreign friend would come to see me,i would bring him to appreciate the most intersting and appealing landscapes in my hometown. In my plans,the good-to-look is not only the natural place of interest but the historical relics. I'll show him the Heban mountain in the west-south of the city.we can climb the mountain while i can tell him many funny and traditional stories to him.In the mountain,the different kind of trees are freely grown up and they generate the freshest air, and so many little lakes among the rocks which like the stars make the mountain more beautiful.You may see some animals at times.And then,Heban mountain is also a famous historical place because in 40's a Kangri war happened here.I'll show him the relics to him and tell him the stories about our heros.