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Today,I feel very emptiness.Because I think I spent a day in vain.I had originally intended to seriously practice programing today.However life is always full of temptation.For various reasons,I din't not withstand the temptation,so this afternoon I have been playing the computer game. To be honest, I do not actually enjoying playing computer games,of cause I don't like to play computer games.Often due to the kind invitation of friends,I will play games with them.For now,I prefer to learn english and watch english speech in my own time,because I think english is useful.For me,a high level of english will not only be able to let me pass grade exams,but also for the future life very useful.Even good english can come in handy when I travel. Now I particularly admire Jack Ma-Alibaba founder.He spent more than 10 years,from an english teacher to grow to the present world-class Group Chairman.I have seen his an english speech at the 2008,which touched me the most is the word:"never ever forget and give up your dream".People can not get something for nothing,only by adhering to dreams to succeed. I really feel like I wasted a lot of time today.But I can not regret,because regret is useless and regret does not change anything.All I can do is just let it do better later!
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