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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40866
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰。

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September 19 2014 Today,I feel very emptiness.Because I think I spent a day in vain.I had originally intended to seriously practice programing today.However life always full of temptation.For various reasons,I did not withstand the temptation,so this afternoon I have been playing the computer game. To be honest, I do not actually enjoying playing computer games,of cause I don't like to play computer games.Often due to the kind invitation of friends,I will play games with them.For now,I prefer to learn english and watch english speech in my own time,because I think english is useful.For me,a high level of english will not only be able to let me pass grade exams,but also for the future life very useful.Even good english can come in handy when I travel. Now I particularly admire Jack Ma-Alibaba founder.He spent more than 10 years,from an english teacher to grow to the present world-class Group Chairman.I have seen his an english speech at the 2008,which touched me the most is the word:"never ever forget and give up your dream".People can not get something for nothing,only by adhering to dreams to succeed. I really feel like I wasted a lot of time today.But I can not regret,because regret is useless and regret does not change anything.All I can do is just let it do better later!

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