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文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；作者词汇基础不错，同时请加强单词拼写的检查；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段。
Each coin has two sides,putting all eggs in one basket,likely,has both advantages and disadvantages.Yet,in my opinion,its disadvantages of putting your eggs in one basket far outweigh its advantages.Thus,it is never too careful to always have plan B when we cope with important events.Nobady can know what are going to do in the future.When unexpect occidents happened,you would find yourself in a desperate sitiuation，losing every thing you have.Putting all you have in one basket equals to putting all the risks and pressures into together.That's why we should consider all the possible risks and prepare extra plans ahead before we make decisions on important events. In other words,we must have different plans and preparetion for the fear of undesireable results. In conclusion,it is unadvisalb to put all eggs on one basket.That's because this may give rise to unaffordable and unexpectable consquences which might make you disappointed and annoyed.Therefore,I assert that we should have alternative plans to assure everything goes well.
