全文结构较为严谨;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
Nowadays, there are more and more people shopping on the internet and it has become a fashion.Why is it so popular with us? Many people rather go shopping on the internet than on the supermarket in our real life because of its advantage.People who like shopping on the internet almost because we can select something we want and the price of the goods. Of course, there are also a part of them prefer to it because of covenienty. If we want to buy something on Oline Shopping and final we decied to buy it ,we can only wait for it at home but needn't go outdoors. But there are also a lot of disavantage. The goods on the internet sometimes is not real and what we received is different from it. What's the more ,the quality of goods can not be assured because we can tough them. In my opinion,everything has two handles,we should judge it carefully. Don't be blind.If you assure that is good and suit you,don't hasimate,but if you can't, think over carefully.