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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9569
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
要求
1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, there are more and more people go shopping on the internet and it has become a fashion.Why is it so popular with us? Many people rather go shopping on the internet than on the supermarket in our real life because of its advantage.People who like shopping on the internet almost because we can select something we want and the price of the goods. Of course, a part of them prefer it because of covenant. If we want to buy something on Oline Shopping and final we decide to buy it ,we can only wait for it at home but needn't go outdoors. But there are also a lot of disadvantage. The goods on the internet sometimes is not real and what we received is different from it. What's the more,the quality of goods can not be assured because we can tough them. In my opinion,everything has two handles,so we should judge it carefully. Don't be blind.If you make sure that issuit and good for you,don't hasitate,but if you can't, think over carefully.

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