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Each coin has two sides.Putting all eggs in one basket,likely,has both advantages and disadvantages.Yet,in my opinion,disadvantages of putting all eggs in one basket far outweigh its advantage.Thus it is never too careful to always plan B when we cope with important events.Nobody can know what are going to happen in the future.When unexpected accidents happened,you would find yourself in a desperate situation,losing every thing you have.Putting all eggs in one basket are equated with putting risks and pressures together.That's why we need to consider all the possible risks and prepare extra plans ahead before we make decisions on important events.In the others,we must have different plans and preparations for the fear of undesirable results. In conclusion,it is unwise to put all eggs in only one basket.That is because this may give rise to unaffordable and unexpectable consequences which might make you disappointed and annoyed.Therefore,I assert that we should have alternative choices to assure everything goes well.
