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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第38篇: 学生学习历史和文学是否比学习科学和数学更重要

发布时间:2013-08-16 16:48浏览次数:4082
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics.

Use specific reasons to support your opinion.

学生学习历史和文学是否比学习科学和数学更重要。你的观点是?并给出原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

History and literature or science and mathematics In the modern world,with the rapid development of technology,our life condition become better and better.From my point of view,I do agree that history and literature are very important for us.Cause history would tell us what kind of mistake that the ancient made in the past and then we could learn from it in order to avoiding it and literature is one of the best amusements in our life which makes our spear time much more colorful.Otherwise,science and mathematics are the most great things in the world which already changed our daily life dramatically and completely. First of all,not only can science teach us about the universe.But also it made our life become more and more convenient and easy in some degree.For example,it is science which give us electricity,car,plane,train,telephone and computer,internet and so forth.And Those things are necessary in our daily normal life.What's more,it is mathematics that enlighten us and train our brain become smarter.There is an old saying that if someone has a long time living without studying mathematics,then his or her mind would become slower and slower.I can't agree it more.Besides I love mathematics and science most in my life cause them bring a lot to us,human being. As mentioned in my view,studying mathematics and science are much more significant than history and literature.

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