2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章学术词汇使用熟练，词汇表达较为丰富；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

With the development of the technology,our life become more and more colorful.Especially with the help of the computers.More and more people are tend to communicate with friends or families by them.when talking about the computers,we all appreciate it .Because the computers have become a important part in our daily life and we are rely on it .when it is free,we are accustomed to watch movies and programs on it.For many other people ,they can deal with work or record something easily by this way. However,man should realize when the computer provide convenience for us ,meanwhile,bring some negative factors.such as some diseases coming ,lack of talking with people face to face and some physical influence. In my opinion ,man and computers can influence each other.so man should make a good use of computers.To make our life more and more happiness ,less of sad.