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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(30): 大学新生

发布时间:2014-08-29 18:09浏览次数:609
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Sun Yue is a fresh senior 1 student. She and her best friend are studying in different senior high schools. She’s worried that they can’t be good friends any more, so she wrote to the editor for advice. Write your advice to Sun Yue as an editor. (字数要求:120字左右)

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文中词汇使用较丰富,学术词汇使用要加强;可适当增加从句和长句的使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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Dear Sun Yue, When people move between schools, old friendships often suffer as new ones seem to take their place. But it doesn’t have to be this way. If you truly value a friendship, then you should be able to make the effort to save it. Distance can by no means stop you spending time with this person. Make an appointment with her at weekends. Explain that you feel as if the two of you are growing apart and that you don’t want this to happen. I think your friend will be touched by your care about your friendship. You can then arrange to spend more time together at weekends or keep in touch with each other by e-mails. Try taking some action, and I believe your friendship will last long. Editor

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