作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段。
It is unwise to draw a conclusion by seeing or hearing something directly.The reasons are as follows.Firtly, there are lots of fake news or informations in our daily life.The producer ofy the messages is likely to make himself be famous,so he can make lots of money.Secondly,sometimes what we saw is not the truth,it is only a part .SO we have to keep the brain clear and should use it to analyse something.Fianlly,we are live in a modern society,words and pictures can be copy.it is dangerous and unimaginable. In my opinion ,everyone should make themselves be more clever.when come across something ,first should calm down then should try to analyse it .Lacking of thinking,relying on what we saw.It will hurt us and cheat us ,so foster a good habit and deal with the problems like a detctive.
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