小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词；连词使用偏少。

I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much. I have a good friend .She is a beautiful girl.she has long black hair,two big black eyes and a red mouth.her voice is better ,she good at singing. she is a clever girl ,she likes reading books ,playing computer games and chess.she is also nice.she often helps us .our classmates like her very much.