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It has been described in the drawing that three sons and one daughter ,who are guarding their goal, while the old father being kicked as a ball. This picture does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon. Nowadays many young people doesn’t want to take care of their parents and refuse to take the responsibility. There is an old sayings that raise children to provide against old age. Young people should take the responsibility of taking care of the old parents. However, as the time goes by, the morality praised highly before, has been changed gradually. The reason behind this phenomena, much of this, understandably, looks far less like a lack of ability of supporting the old, and a good deal more like a lack of moral consciousness, while the young people becoming more selfish. If everyone fight only for their own interests, will there be any hope for the future? There’s no doubt that we should make efforts to promote moral education , and caring the old consciously. Only in these ways can we ensure a better life for the aged.