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【题目要求】
Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion.
【写作分析】
第一段：看电视是孩子们很重要的课余活动，有些孩子甚至对电视成瘾
第二段：看电视太多的消极面
1对身体健康不利
2 减少和同龄人以及家人的互动与交流
3 对智力发展不利
4 有些电视内容不适合小孩子
第三段：适量有选择的看电视有益儿童发展
1 增加知识，和探索世界的兴趣
2 丰富课余生活
3 和父母或同龄人一起看有助于更好的亲子或朋友互动
第四段：适量地选择适合孩子的电视节目，并且尽量和父母或同龄人一同看电视有助于孩子的健康发展，否则电视将对孩子产生消极影响。
作者词汇基础扎实；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；若注意部分错误，文章会更漂亮。
Our world is full of high-tech including televisions nowadays.Most of the families own at least one TV whether rich or not.In addition,the number of children attracted to the television has been increasing for several decades.The phenomenon raises such question whether the influences of television is positive or not to our children. In China,we can see that large-scale of teachers and parents hold a negative view.The first reason is the flash from the screen is bad for children's eyesight.The second opinion supporting them is that watching the television would decrease the time which they could have spent exercising and studying. I agree with them partially.Because watching the shows which encourage people to take risks would make the next generation more risky according to some research conclusions,and also,some experts links the violent TV shows to the increasing aggressiveness in our children. The TV shows have some negative effects,nonetheless I think that the TV shows is beneficial to teenagers' future.The news can enlarge people's sight,and the interview shows can deep one's mind,and as for the talk show,the children can learn the humor from it.
