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字数：300 满分：100分
作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；连词使用偏少。
As students , controlling our daily spending is very helpful for us to balance our economy. As we have no income, we have to carefully figure out various kinds of methods to save the money in our pockets. From this point of view, I cannot agree more the opinion that buying smart makes us smart consumers. As we know , with the internet develop, we can use the internet in looking for all kinds of coupons and discount information, we also could buying some clothes in Seasonal discount , it is really a good way in saving money , meanwhile , we have an excellent satisfytion .we can call it as killing two birds with one stone . In one word , as students , keeping a good life in using the discount information , it is an awesome way . we hope that all of us can be smart in consuming.
