新课标八年级下学期期末测试冲刺复习专题书面表达（2）：给大卫的一封信

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Dear David: I know you will come to Lanzhou to learn Chinese soon.Many foreigner say it is hard to learn Chinese well.But I don't agree.I think if you really like Chinese and study very hard,you will understand Chinese.And there are many ways to learn Chinese well.you could join a Chinese learning club and make frieds with Chinese.You could make progress by talking with them.You could read more Chinese books .It could help you learn more about Chinese history and learn new words.You also could watch some Chinese movies to improve your listening skills.I think if you put your heart into learning Chinese. you will improve a lot in a short time and have a good time with Chinese. Best wishes Chenquan