作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
September 20 2014 Now I feel very tired.Today I lead a life of pleasure.First of all,this morning after I finished recite in English just start playing the game rather than exercising programing.Then this afternoon I had go to KTV to sing.So now I feel very tired and the tired constantly eroding the will to learn. To be honest,I know people are very easy to be controlled bt it's own inertia.But very often,for various reasons,people can not always according to plan,then it will deviate from the original plan.Eventually people will become lazy.There is a saying goes:"people walking in the road for a long time will forget the first goal",and I believe that. For now,I feel the most important thing is not to reprove the previous error,but re-establish small goals,such as write English diary tonight and practice programming.I can sleep easily after this is done.Hope tonight I can have a good dream!
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