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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40880
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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September 20 2014 Now I feel very tired.Today I lead a life of pleasure.First of all,this morning after I finished recite in English just start playing the game rather than exercising programing.Then this afternoon I had gone to KTV to sing.So now I feel very tired and the tired constantly eroding the will to learn. To be honest,I know people are very easy to be controlled by its own inertia.But very often,for various reasons,people can not always according to plan,then it will deviate from the original plan.Eventually people will become lazy.There is a saying goes:"people walking in the road for a long time will forget their first goal".I believe that. For now,I feel the most important thing is not to blame the previous error,but re-establish small goals,such as writing English diary tonight and practice programming.I can sleep easily after this is done.Hope tonight I can have a good dream!

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