2005年山东高考写作范文:中国学生过生日的方式

有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in many different ways, but most of them celebrate in three mainly ways.One of the approaches is by holding birthday party,on which they will have a great fun and enjoy themselves by playing games and singing songs.Not only do they send birthday gifts , but also they make the best wishes. As for me , I think we can celebrate our birthday better by planting trees of helping somepeople who in need,which can not only makes contributions to others and enable us to be happier.