2005年山东高考写作范文:中国学生过生日的方式

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；句式多变，多多练习从句的使用；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in many different ways, but most of them celebrate in three mainly ways.One of the approaches is by holding birthday party,on which they will have a great fun and enjoy themselves by playing games and singing songs.Not only do they send birthday gifts, but also they make the best wishes. As for me, I think we can celebrate our birthday better by planting trees of helping some people who in need,which can not only makes contributions to others and enable us to be happier.