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[写作内容]
根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：5．你的偶像及理由。
[写作要求]
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。
Last week , we did a survey among 2,600 students on the “ who is your idol “ The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols , while 48% of the boys figure sports stars . As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls , but the for the boys. However , the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life.
