2005年12月24日英语四级作文真题:名校校园旅游

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Now ,the university campus is open to tourists.It seems to be a way to attract people to visit the school.Obviously,it can let more people better know the school.But,it also has some people against it. For some students ,who live in the school.It may disturb their study and living.They can not have a quiet place to study.Usually,some visitors came to their classrooms to take photos.That may not polite.Also,they litter the rubbish everywhere,the school is not beautiful as usual In my opinion,people can visit school.The school should take actions to avoid the such things happened.Such as limit the number of the visiting.