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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，不过单词拼写方面要继续努力；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意文中的句子错误；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。
To hubin@163.com From the day 15th to 22th,the exhibition you have held in New York,all the product you showed were incredible,which maked me feeling exciting.One of them which cautch my eyes,the No.5670 new product. So I am looking forward to establishing business relationship with you.May I have the chance to work with you?If we have the opportunity,please sending the price list and instruction which has the detail about the new product 5670. Waiting for the best news from you.The best wish to you! From KPOHsales@hotmail.com
