Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
as we can see in the table ,there is no denying that education levels play an very important role in incomes.the data reveals obviously that people's salary vary distinctly with different degrees. but can a degree ensure a promising future?the answer is no,as far as i am concerned.on one hand,what the employer asks for is the ability to solve problems quickly and efficiently rather than sit in the bureau talking in how many books you have red.on the other hand,time is always changing .most of the knowledge need to be updated,so what really counts is the skill to learn and the capacity to use your knowledge.that is to say ,only when you show your value to the company could you get the money in correspondence. in conclusion,the ability accounts for education pays not the degree itself.