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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46206
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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as we can see in the table ,there is no denying that education levels play an very important role in incomes.the data reveals obviously that people's salary vary distinctly with different degrees. but can a degree ensure a promising future?the answer is no,as far as i am concerned.on one hand,what the employer asks for is the ability to solve problems quickly and efficiently rather than sit in the bureau talking in how many books you have red.on the other hand,time is always changing .most of the knowledge need to be updated,so what really counts is the skill to learn and the capacity to use your knowledge.that is to say ,only when you show your value to the company could you get the money in correspondence. in conclusion,the ability accounts for education pays not the degree itself.

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