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After having lunch in a small village pub, I tired to look for my bag which I had left on a chair beside the door but now wasn't there. When I was doing so, the landlord came in. “Did you have a good meal?” He asked. “Yes, of course, thanks” I answered with embarrassment, “but I’m afraid there is a problem, you see. I can’t pay the bill because I haven’t got my bag.” The landlord smiled and immediately went out. In a few minutes he went back with my bag and gave it to me. “I’m very sorry,” he said. “My dog had taken it into the garden. He often does this.”
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