2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；请注意分段。

It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.There are some reasons.Firstly,when we start doing a thing it also brings lots of risks.Those are all uncertain and unassess.Secondly,like a coin has two sides.Putting all eggs in one basket means we have to consider the advantages and the disadvantages.But all of them are not clear to us . In my opinion, if we want to finish something and doing well,it is crucial for us to analyse and think it seriously.Only we realize the inner risks and out factors,can we reduce the cost and increase the chance of success.