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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

Thesedays there is a general discussion about the issue of judging a person by their appearance.People's opinion differ greatly concering this phenomenon.Is it wise to judge a person by their appearence? It is definitely not. They are numerous reasons explaning this phenomenon.First and foremost,although good appearance is helpful to leave others a good impression in the frist meeting.Kindness and inner thought is the most important to make friends for all life times.Scondly,many facts that some people with charming appearence make no successful,while others without handsome appearence achieve a lot.Last but not the least,with the development of science and technology,plastic surgery can change one's appearence,so maybe the people with sourness only alter their appearance but not develop their virtue. Admittedly,it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.so people should have more communication with others to find the beauty of their inner thought.

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