2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

September 21 2014 Today,I carefully think about why I would regret that I did not become a pos-graduate. Concluded that I just do not have confidence in me.I think my ability is not enough qualified a good job.The most important reason is that I am in escapism. I once imagined if God give me a chance to re-live college life how I would deal with it.I found out that my most want is not to continue to graduate shool,but the re-use of the university sufficient time to enrich myself,and let myself have a better capability to finally be able to make a difference in my own field.My goal is to obtain a better capacity rather than high grades. Based on this conclusion,I want to tell myself:"I can now seriously studying,I can now study harder,so when I graduated I would not regret it". So,keep it,the opportunity everywhere!