题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
September 21 2014 Today,I carefully think why I would regret that I did not become a pos-graduate. Concluded that I just do not have confidence in me.I think my ability is not enough qualified for a good job.The most important reason is that I am in escapism. I once imagined if God give me a chance to re-live college life how I would deal with it.I found out that what I care about most is not to become a graduate student but the re-use of the university sufficient time to enrich myself,and let myself have a better capability to finally be able to make a difference in my own field.My goal is to obtain a better capacity rather than high grades. Based on this conclusion,I want to tell myself:"I can now seriously studying,I can now study harder,so when I graduated I would not regret it". So,keep it,the opportunity everywhere!