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4. 参考词汇：China dream，come true ,achieve one’s dreams., give up， hold on to, make up of
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my dream everyone and even every contries are paying because of their romantic dreams,isn't it?of course i have one.since my chilhood,i have dreamed of being an excllent teacher for my contry---china!china dream is a hot topic at present.but i think its not only my dream,but also every chinese dreams！in order to achieve our dream,i"ll try my best to make it come ture.
