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4. 参考词汇：China dream，come true ,achieve one’s dreams., give up， hold on to, make up of
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My dream Everyone and even every countries are paying because of their romantic dreams,isn't it?Of course i have one.Since my childhood,i have dreamed of being an excellent teacher for my country---China!China dream is a hot topic at present.but i think its not only my dream,but also every chinese dreams！In order to achieve our dream,i"ll try my best to make it come true.
