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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17420
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分89.5分
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文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

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Currently we are live in a stage when we are combined with computer rather tightly. With the rapid development of such technology,such phenomenon has aroused hot debate among public individuals. Some see computer as a convenient way in which they are capable of gathering information they want and a tool they can utilize to spend spare time by watching online TV or listening music.While others hold the sharply different view that it would not only have a negative effect on study but also jeopardize eyesight severely if we were addicted to computer. As far as I am concerned,I argue for the point that the using computer appropriately is beneficial to us a lot.As a college student,we do have the ability to manage the schedule properly and to control ourselves.As a kind of efficient instrument,computers play an increasingly important role in our daily life.Once we encounter difficult problems,the majority of us may start the searching engines to find answer or related information.By the way,it is the computer that enriches our life of university and broaden our sight in the world.As long as you don't abandon yourselves in computer gaming,computer can act as a reliable assistant in your life.

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